-Narrative Writing (Ice-Cream lovers)

Once upon a time on a nice hot sunny day, Brooklyn , Angel , Phoenix , Julieana and mum decided to go and get an ice-cream. Mum told all four of the girls to get ready and hop in the car,mum told them that they were going to get happy.The girls were joyful,when they arrived at the ice-cream store mum reached in her wallet/purse to get her money out to buy all of them an ice-cream. Mum said to the girls ``Oh no , I don't have enough money” Brooklyn said “Aww mum,I thought that's why we came because you had money for all of us to get an ice-cream” mum said “Sorry”. Angel told mum if we could go home and look for money around the house,Mum said “Yes that's a good idea”. On the way home,Phoenix was a bit sad because mum didn't have enough money for ice-cream Julieana cherred Phoenix up with singing with her and also talking to Phoenix. They arrived home,mum said lets go around the house to see if there is any money in between the cupboards and draws. 

The girls hopped out of the car happily and they were skipping into the house, Brooklyn and Angel said they were gonna look around up stairs , and Phoenix and Julieana said that they were gonna go look around down stairs with mum. Brooklyn and Angel did everything together,they were just like twins,Phoenix and Julieanan had their ups and downs but they still got along with each other. Mum found 50c under the couch,Brooklyn and Angel found 2.00 up stairs and Phoenix and Julieana found 5.00 . That all equalled 7.10c , Mum yelled out to the girls “ Lets go, we are going to get some ice-cream now “Wooohooo. The girls quickly ran into the car and were very happy. Mum said “seat belts on everybody,we got to get to an ice-cream store”, on the way to the ice-cream store,mum told Phoenix to count the money. 

When they arrived the girls got out of the car and went to wait inline for ice-cream. Brooklyn and Phoenix got a blueberry flavoured ice-cream, Julieana got a Chocolate ice-cream,Angel got a normal ice-cream and mum got a Strawberry ice-cream. They all went and sat on the chair near the ice-cream store, mum took a photo of them eating their ice-cream. It was time to go home. The girls got into the car and were very happy that they got ice-cream,mum was also happy too. 

They made it home,the girls had 1 hour to play outside and then it was their shower time,Brooklyn and Angel always played together sometimes without Phoenix and Julieana. Phoenix and Julieana asked Brooklyn and Angel if they wanted to play tag with them around the house,both of the girls said sure.After about 30 minutes,mum said to the girls to go and have a shower there was always a timetable of whos going first and whos going last.It went Phoenix , Julieana , Angel then Brooklyn. Brooklyn was always last because she is the oldest out of all the girls. The girls had a shower and mum was busy cooking dinner, when the girls finished having a shower they all went down stairs and waited till dinner was ready.