Wednesday, 2 August 2017

ned show

Ned Show


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On my plate is a delicious sandwich ready for me to eat.  Filled with chicken and salad, the sandwich melts in my mouth.  The sandwich is sitting in my lunchbox waiting for me to eat.

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A yoyo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with.

Yesterday the hole of pt england  went to the hall to see a  really really cool show about this lady could hayle and this boy could ned. When everyone sat down hayle had heaps of yoyos to show us some really  cool tricks with the yoyos the bestest trick i liked from the yoyo was when she did the eiffel tower the tricks she did was are eiffel tower and are star.

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