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Thursday, 26 October 2017

MY SPRINT TRACK WRITING

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

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Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:
COOL WORDS:
First
Once
At first
Initially

TOPIC SENTENCES:
P1:  At first Mr Moran gave the pavilion some instruction and they were girls  go and line up by the race track on the grass and get ready  to have a race.    
P2: Half of the class went and ran for the top 4 went with miss moala.
P3: Then we went back inside our class and Miss Moala was talking to us.  
P4: After Miss Moala has finished talking to us we had to get our chromebook.




Start your writing here:

At first  Miss Moala and Mr Moran was talking to us to give us  some instructions the instructions where we gone outside sneaky so nobody knows we are outside. When we're outside we sat down on the deck and waited for Mr Moran and Miss Moala to tell us to stand up and go sit on the concrete.We waited again for Mr Moran to tell half of the girls Norah-Jade to Julia but Julia did not listen to Mr Moran because she was talking to Phoenix

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