Tuesday, 31 October 2017
Monday, 30 October 2017
MY WOLF WRITING
Start your writing here:
Today the pav went outside to play a game called what’s the time Mr Wolf Mr Moran was saying the time to us and Sivaenah was the girl who said what’s the time Mr Wolf. When Sivaenah said what’s the time Mr Wolf Mr Moran tricked us so we can all go at to the back but some of us didn’t move only like 4 or 5 people moved. Then the second time Sivaenah said what’ the time Mr Wolf Mr Moran turned around and then he saw me move so I had to go to the back when I was walking to the back I was screaming.
Thursday, 26 October 2017
MY SPRINT TRACK WRITING
Sprint Track
We have just been outside racing against our friends.
Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.
Transition Words
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Past tense
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First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
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You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!
E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
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If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
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Plan Here:
COOL WORDS:
First
Once
At first
Initially
TOPIC SENTENCES:
P1: At first Mr Moran gave the pavilion some instruction and they were girls go and line up by the race track on the grass and get ready to have a race.
P2: Half of the class went and ran for the top 4 went with miss moala.
P3: Then we went back inside our class and Miss Moala was talking to us.
P4: After Miss Moala has finished talking to us we had to get our chromebook.
Start your writing here:
At first Miss Moala and Mr Moran was talking to us to give us some instructions the instructions where we gone outside sneaky so nobody knows we are outside. When we're outside we sat down on the deck and waited for Mr Moran and Miss Moala to tell us to stand up and go sit on the concrete.We waited again for Mr Moran to tell half of the girls Norah-Jade to Julia but Julia did not listen to Mr Moran because she was talking to Phoenix
Tuesday, 24 October 2017
IMMERSION ASSEMBLY
Immersion Assembly
Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing
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When we plan, we need to think about:
- Who our audience is.
- How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
- How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
- How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.
Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
- Descriptive words
- Ideas for a hook
- Key things you can remember from the assembly
- What you enjoyed
- What made you laugh
Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).
Step 3: Write your recount!
Transition Words
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Past tense
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First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
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You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!
E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
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If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
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When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.
Start writing here:
Paragraph 1 Mr Burt song .
At first Mr Burt, Mr J and Mrs Nua sang a song called Musical Madness. Where. We were in the school hall.
Paragraph 2 after song.
The first thing that happened was Mr Burt Mr J and Mrs Nua sang a song called Musical Madness and then they stopped singing and Mr Burt Mr J and Mrs Nua started talking to the whole Pt England kid’s and teacher’s. After that it was the year 1 Item th show us their thing that the teachers did in the holiday’s.
Paragraph 3 after talking to us.
After Mr Burt Mr J and Mrs Nua stopped talking to the Pt England kids in the hall Mr Burt said it is time for the year 1’s Item. When they got on stage they started playing snap with the card’s. My favourite Item was the team 5’s one because it had all the teachers that a in teams 5 block their movie was about the lion king. When they were watching the lion king they had popcorn.
Dear Dumb Diary
Today I am reading a new book and its is called Dear Dumb Diary .Dear Dumb Diary I'm trying to grow an accent Isabella was over last night and we were watch this movie and it had this one girl from England in it and everything she said sounded smart or dainty. She could say Oh do pardon me but my little pup has dropped a major steamer on your priceless antique tablecloth.
Wednesday, 18 October 2017
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