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Wednesday, 7 June 2017

taniwha

The Taniwha
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Use descriptive words.

We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:

-What do you see (all of the picture)?
-Describe the Taniwha.
-What can you hear/smell?

Start your writing here:
As I was running pass the big green grass with my friends. i saw a fierce creature it was laying in the big green grass because i think it is so so so hungry to eat the for little kids. the for little kids were taking some pictures of the fierce creature. When the for little kid were taking some pictures of the fierce creature he got really really really mad that's why the fierce creature wants to eat the for little kids.  

The cool brown fierce creature is wanting to eat the for little kids because i think the fierce creature is very hungry and the fierce creatures has long pointed horns and it has really sharp teeth. When i for little kids ran they shouting out help help there is a fierce creature trying to eat us please help us please.  

The cool brown fierce creature smells like rotten eggs and the smell is really yea-key because it's like it has not had a shower in 20 years or 10 years that’s why he smells yeak.

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